Every day my language arts class works to improve their revision and editing skills by correcting poorly constructed sentences. We call these Daily Oral Language sentences a clever name: DOL! To be successful, we read each sentence several times looking for a different problem each time. First we check for spelling mistakes, then for incorrect capitalization, punctuation problems, and finally grammar and usage errors. We always do it in this order. But, it can be difficult to remember each step.
I want to make it easier to remember the order. Can you come up with a phrase to help our memory remember the steps? This memory aid is called a mnemonic device. Here are the rules: 1– submit a comment with your suggestion. After we have a few, we’ll judge these as a class. All entries will receive a prize, but a big prize will go to the winner.
Think hard. Take a risk. Have fun!
-Mrs. B
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By: mollyhp8 on October 12, 2009
at 7:59 pm
your wrighting was greeat do some more
By: dillonb on October 12, 2009
at 1:46 pm
i think you know what your talking about and you explained everything good detail.i wanted to read more and that’s what i like to see
sincerily, your best student ,megan
By: megan t 6 on October 12, 2009
at 12:11 pm
HA Mrs.B I came up with one. Stew caught Polly fanning grandma and useing grapes
By: Tristan C. #4 on October 12, 2009
at 10:26 am
WOW!Mrs. B you write really good!!!!
By: Aili N. per.4 on October 12, 2009
at 10:13 am
I wanted to read on an on!
By: Bryce T. on October 12, 2009
at 10:06 am
the candy sounded mouth wotering.
By: jacob s on October 12, 2009
at 9:43 am
realy good word descriptives love it
By: Austin on October 12, 2009
at 9:42 am